Here’s the first poem I’ve written inspired by my poetry challenge. Someone over on Facebook suggested the idea, ‘Dancing like no-one is looking, then noticing that they ALL are!’
I went out drinking with a friend,
We both knew how the night would end.
Laughter, fun and raucous dancing,
Stopping life from fast advancing.
Dressed in heels and make-up on,
Our fear and inhibitions gone.
We ate a meal – how civilised,
Excitement only just disguised.
A cocktail first and then one more,
We headed off towards the door.
Towards the club where deep within,
Our fantasy would soon begin.
We chose a club that only played
The music from our fave decade.
The 80s (as you know is great),
To hit the floor, we couldn’t wait.
We put our bags down on a chair
And ran our fingers through our hair.
Then sectioned out our bit of space,
Picked up the rhythm of the base.
Around us all the people stood,
Ignoring us – we knew they would.
Two ‘daft old ladies’ trying to dance,
Not even worthy of a glance.
The music pumped right through our veins;
The gloves were off, no more constrains.
We strutted like we didn’t care,
Because we didn’t, to be fair.
Our arms were waved above our heads
(No tea for us, tucked up in bed).
We kicked our legs and twirled around,
At one point lunging to the ground!
We vogued like no-one had before
And absolutely owned the floor.
We danced and tripped the light fantastic,
All our limbs became elastic.
No nerves or tiny steps for us,
Our moves were big and obvious.
We both were on a stage somewhere,
Just grinning, dancing not a care.
The music stopped we clung on tight,
Then laughed out loud, oh what a night!
Our faces glowed, our smiles were wide;
Two friends just standing side by side.
We looked around and saw the youth,
Who maybe struggled with the truth.
Their eyes on stalks, mouths open wide,
We simply couldn’t hide our pride.
We fetched our bags, and linked our arms,
Then smiled around with grace and charm.
We turned and sauntered off the floor –
Always leave them wanting more.
There’s more to life than just a number,
Never leave your zest to slumber.
Do the things you LOVE to do,
Have fun, have laughs, be bold – BE YOU!
This is based on a night out which my friend and I still smile and laugh about. We’re already looking forward to the next one…
Let me know if you still go out dancing, and do you care if people are watching?
Takes me back does this *grins*. Esme still dances, but usually just on the Cloud, clubs nights are still on the agenda at times though and when they are, yes, I’ll dance and dance away regardless of who is looking, just so long as I have at least one other loon joining me hahahaha.
– Esme the boogie Queen upon the Cloud
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Oh yes…dancing on your own is something completely different lol! Thanks for your comment Esme upon the cloud…I’d love to join you on your cloud one day, it sounds like a lot of fun 🙂
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You’re welcome, and yes I have fine time upon the Cloud, I bet you had some fun writing that poem too!
– Esme of Cloud fame waving
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I did indeed…almost as much fun as I had on the actual night out lol!
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I love this, Midlife Dramas in Pyjamas! You are dancing my dance. This is funny but so empowering to us midlifers (and beyond) who are not ashamed to dance unhibitied even when everyone is looking!
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Thanks Molly 😊 If we lived nearer we could go dancing together 🤗
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Yes! We’d have great fun. We’d be home by 9pm, right?
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Hahaha! Turn that upside down to make it 6…am. Now you’re talking! 🙂
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Ugh! My bags under my eyes will have bags! But if you insist, I’ll give it a try.
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Yes I do insist! I’ll see you there 😂
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This is perfect!😁
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Ah thanks! Much appreciated 🙂
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I have a wedding in a few weeks and can’t to dance all night long. Go you, love it xx
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I was out dancing last night with my sister…got in at 3am!! Knackered now mind…😂
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Well done. Good luck with the recovery 😆
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Always leave them wanting more! Glad it was awesome.
#tweensteensbeyond
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It was indeed. Makes me smile every time I think about it 🙂
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And now I can’t stop singing ‘Oh What A Night’. All your fault. You are good at this aren’t you!! #tweensteensbeyond
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Hahaha sorry about that Nicky – NOT! Lol! Thanks for your lovely comment. Great to know I’m good at something as I’m hardly setting the blogging world alight with my other ramblings, however the poems seem to be striking a chord. My next one’s about body hair!! 🙂
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You were born to do this!!
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Shucks thanks 😊 Well, if you know of any publishers who’d be interested in a book of funny poems about midlife – let me know lol! 😂
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Oh thats hilarious! I love dancing and my Mr. Menace and I do go to the club once in a while, but I don’t really have a girlfriend that I hang out with.
Two thumbs up on the p oem!
🙂 gwingal
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Thanks! I appreciate it 😊
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Oh God it’s years since I danced. Reading this I think I need to give it a go – that’s if my back is up to it! Hysterical as always! xx #TweensTeensBeyond
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Thanks! My next poem is about body hair; contemplating how my use of ‘lady garden’ will be received! 😂😂
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You are a comic genius. Love this and so with you on dancing like no-one is looking. It is almost a pre-requisite at our age isn’t it? If my kids are there they turn away in embarrassment. Thanks for linking as always. #TweensTeensBeyond
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Ah thanks Jo, that’s a lovely thing to say. If my kids are there it makes my dancing become even wilder…strange that! I’m certainly enjoying writing my poems. So many people have answered my challenge to come up with a topic for a future poem. I now can’t get them out of my head and onto the paper fast enough lol!
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Oh, how I love dancing! I love your poem and I wish I had a friend like you to go out dancing with. I’m not sure I’d dance as well as you, but I’m sure I’d enjoy it just as much!
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Thanks! Not sure my skill matches my enthusiasm 😂😂
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Oh I loved this! I also loved the fact that it rhymed! Your sense of rhythm is perfect! Thank you! How to Harness your Hashtags – #8 in ProBlogger Challenge
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Thanks Shirley, what a lovely thing to say x
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Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Can I go with you on the next night out? 🙂
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You certainly can…I’ll let you know when I’m going again 🙂 Thanks for your kind words x
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Loved this…sadly my friends and I can’t find anywhere to go dancing these days…and I just want to dance, dance, dance!
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Get them round to your house, dim the lights and turn the music up LOUD! 😊
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Good Idea!
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😊
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Definitely brings back oh so many memories ❤
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Wonderfully constructed I might add. 😉
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Why thank you 🤗
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Thanks. Get your dancing shoes on and make new memories 😊
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